Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. Indian xxx Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. Good luck.READERReport 2004-06-30 13:03:42suktREADERReport 2004-06-15 16:11:13well I liked this story . . … Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. Good luck.READERReport 2004-06-30 13:03:42suktREADERReport 2004-06-15 16:11:13well I liked this story . . … 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-08 23:50:22And I was just wndoering about that too!READERReport 2007-06-09 19:00:59awfulREADERReport 2004-09-18 16:03:08Yeah, the grammar and spelling were both really off. Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. great work«12» great work«12» 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-08 23:50:22And I was just wndoering about that too!READERReport 2007-06-09 19:00:59awfulREADERReport 2004-09-18 16:03:08Yeah, the grammar and spelling were both really off. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-01-08 23:50:22And I was just wndoering about that too!READERReport 2007-06-09 19:00:59awfulREADERReport 2004-09-18 16:03:08Yeah, the grammar and spelling were both really off.
