word of advice just stop you aren’t meant for writting stories. keep up the good work! Indian sex word of advice just stop you aren’t meant for writting stories. keep up the good work! 8 s«12»Report 2014-04-15 08:51:30while i agree that the story wasn`t all that great, i do encourage you to work on it a little bit moreanonymous readerReport 2013-01-14 19:49:03needs some work, but you’re not a bad writer. cant wait to read your other stories.anonymous readerReport 2013-01-14 19:48:21needs some work, but you’re not a bad writer. keep up the good work! word of advice just stop you aren’t meant for writting stories. of any kind.chreese1Report 2011-05-24 07:45:21Great story keep up the great work, very romantic and erotic.«12» cant wait to read your other stories.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-20 13:17:30Wow, you people are so dumb. it’s not romantic in any way and definatelly not something i would encourage the author to write again. cant wait to read your other stories.anonymous readerReport 2011-07-20 13:17:30Wow, you people are so dumb. This shit sucks! cant wait to read
