are they condescendingly smart? This is obviously one guy’s opinion, but especially if you’re starting out, you’re 30-chapter-long story that isn’t about character development, just sex, isn’t going to have to many dedicated readers sticking around for chapters ten and up. Indian sex Your plot will have a heavy hand in this. Humans aren’t just sex machines, we have lives outside of sex. This is by no means the rule (in fact from what I’ve seen my stories are the exception) and you should not feel obligated to have that little sex in your story. Why is this? That part is severely important. I often wonder if it’s truly a coincidence that longform erotica writers who clearly write just to showcase sex have stories that all sound the same. If so, this essay will be of little use to you. How does it all balance out? Unless you plan to make a 16-chapter story about one egregiously long boning session, there will be stuff other than sex in
