4 comments«1»READERReport 2005-01-10 22:09:32wtf. … Indianporn Use more euphonisms or none at all. Either make it graphic or alluditory, but not a little bit of both.READERReport 2004-06-08 23:54:04Spelling errors in poetry is suicidal. Post corrections.«1» It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. Post corrections.«1» It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. go homeREADERReport 2004-06-19 13:11:35As jack has written about a lot of your work, you really need to polish it off. Post corrections.«1» 4 comments«1»READERReport 2005-01-10 22:09:32wtf. … go homeREADERReport 2004-06-19 13:11:35As jack has written about a lot of your work, you really need to polish it off. post corrections. It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. post corrections. Post corrections.«1» post corrections. It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack.
