Use more euphonisms or none at all. Post corrections.«1» Use more euphonisms or none at all. Indian xxx Use more euphonisms or none at all. post corrections. post corrections. Use more euphonisms or none at all. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2005-01-10 22:09:32wtf. … post corrections. Use more euphonisms or none at all. It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. post corrections. go homeREADERReport 2004-06-19 13:11:35As jack has written about a lot of your work, you really need to polish it off. Post corrections.«1» Post corrections.«1» It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack. It seems more a first draft than a piece of poetry…READERReport 2004-06-13 23:24:09Your attempt is admirable, but i agree with Jack.















