You’ve given me a headache with your utter stupidity you ridiculous cretin!!!anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:35:15Ok a . Indian xxx But as a writer, I’d say it wasn’t your bag.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:18:26You need to learn the definition of “best” as your name is completely wrong.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:16:02I couldn’t get very far with the horindous destruction of the english language that was going on. This was just absolute shit, if you consider writing another story take my advice… Very fast. 5 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-24 02:57:12It’s a good first try. But you should let someone else write the final draft for you. As others have said, spelling, grammar, and format are important, but you have an interesting storyline going that you can continue to work with. 5 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-24 02:57:12It’s a good first try. Very fast. 5 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-24 02:57:12It’s a good first try. But as a writer, I’d say it wasn’t your bag.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:18:26You need to learn the definition of “best” as your name is completely wrong.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-23 14:16:02I couldn’t get
