A lot of detail in this story. Indian sex 19 comments«1234»Norton5Report 2013-11-20 17:06:35I found it interesting how the protagonist reacted to the big guy being bullied by those jocks, particularly his concern over the notice on the school site. Still don’t like the ‘forgiving attitude’ with Loretta, but it appears you’ve turned the story back around and have it heading in the right direction again. 19 comments«1234»Norton5Report 2013-11-20 17:06:35I found it interesting how the protagonist reacted to the big guy being bullied by those jocks, particularly his concern over the notice on the school site. Keep up with the good work!P.O.I.Report 2013-08-31 07:04:04Well I’m seeing a lot of praise, some honest opinion on what others think would be a more interesting story, and I notice that i’m still not able to get the percentile up above 80 percent.
