Please continue the story?«12» Very difficult to follow when jumping POV multiple times per line. Indianporn 9 comments«12»Randy61Report 2017-03-08 22:50:05ANYONE CATCH THE CONNECTION WITH JENNIES STORY IN NYMPHO AT LARGE 3 WITH HER AND HER DADDY’S KISSES AND IN THIS STORY, THE SECOND TO LAST PARAGRAPH ABOUT THE FRENCH KISSING? Thanks for sharing this.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-31 19:08:28Great story. Very difficult to follow when jumping POV multiple times per line. 9 comments«12»Randy61Report 2017-03-08 22:50:05ANYONE CATCH THE CONNECTION WITH JENNIES STORY IN NYMPHO AT LARGE 3 WITH HER AND HER DADDY’S KISSES AND IN THIS STORY, THE SECOND TO LAST PARAGRAPH ABOUT THE FRENCH KISSING? Thanks for sharing this.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-31 19:08:28Great story. Very difficult to follow when jumping POV multiple times per line. Please continue the story?«12» lol AH HA!anonymous readerReport 2013-04-01 01:46:49Must work on that shifting point of view. lol AH HA!anonymous readerReport 2013-04-01 01:46:49Must work on that shifting point of view. Work on your structure like others have said and and bring on #2.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-31 19:21:16Story is excellent, definitily worthy of more
