18 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-14 04:44:56I wish u would make second ones to the other ones doe. and i like how detailed you get about your characters sexual sensations, but a lot of them are common to a few of your stories, so maybe you could look for a new way to describe pleasure? Indian Porn just a suggestion. Keep up the awesome wrk!!Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-24 04:49:44i really like all yo storiesAnonymous readerReport 2008-05-12 21:48:07That was an amazing story…you are a really good author. the only thing i suggest is proofreading a little bit more because you have a lot of tiny grammatical and detail mistakes. just a suggestion. i havent read a story written by you yet that didnt deserve at least an 8 or 9, but honestly, most of them (including this one) are 10’s. Keep up the awesome wrk!!Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-24 04:49:44i really like all yo storiesAnonymous readerReport 2008-05-12 21:48:07That was an amazing story…you are a really good author. I hope you coninue to write because you are very talented.READERReport 2007-12-26 13:13:39U
