I like how the story flowed in the beginning, but I felt it was a little rushed toward to end. Indian sex Story telling is a lot like love making. I would love for you to continue writing some more wonderful stories.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-11 15:16:14You are a very talented writer. Write part two! I felt that the sex scene was decent, but it could had be more drawn out with more sexual foreplay. I would love for you to continue writing some more wonderful stories.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-11 15:16:14You are a very talented writer. The more the foreplay, the more intense the climax.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-06 23:31:58it’s a good story with lots of romanceanonymous readerReport 2012-11-03 15:08:14I must disagree about being more graphic. Write part two! 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-26 22:15:01A GOOD STORY YOU COULD HAVE GONE INTO MORE DEPTH IN THIER LOVE MAKING KEEP TRYINGthesilent1Report 2013-03-05 18:38:51Well, I had enjoyed reading your first shared story on here. ;)«12» The foreplay could give an opportunity to not only describe these feelings, but also lengthen the story.
