47 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2014-08-08 07:16:39Real goodAnonymous readerReport 2010-07-26 20:10:20learn about what you write do research so you don’t look like a fool. never post a story with two points of view if you want to tell both sides do it in seperate chapters. Indian sex 2nd (a deritive of the first) Work on the detail a little and it would be perfect.«12345» 6/10READERReport 2007-12-09 23:43:54If the GOOD LORD dont like incest he can smite me so dont criticiseREADERReport 2005-12-06 21:21:27First, if she was a virgin, how could she shove an 8 in dildo inside without tearing the hymen(unless she just used the head of it of course). never post a story with two points of view if you want to tell both sides do it in seperate chapters. it’s crap like that makes me want to not even finish reading the story. 2nd (a deritive of the first) Work on the detail a little and it would be perfect.«12345» Learn to use paragraphs. 10″ dick on a 16-yr-old… get a dictionary and
