The plot was ok, although there was no development. 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2016-04-08 19:30:31Your all so stupid pretending you don’t like it, that’s why you came to this site and that’s why you picked this story lol lie to yourself if you like lolanonymous readerReport 2012-02-28 18:47:46Not bad for a start, mostly implausible – especially the social worker leaving the child with you, much less the police. Indian sex The plot was ok, although there was no development. Good story can’t wait for part two!anonymous readerReport 2012-02-28 11:00:52Take this and the sequel and shove it up YOUR ass…pedophile!«1» Then the spelling and grammar. Good story can’t wait for part two!anonymous readerReport 2012-02-28 11:00:52Take this and the sequel and shove it up YOUR ass…pedophile!«1» Alas, you have potential.anonymous readerReport 2012-02-28 14:12:15Great story. The plot was ok, although there was no development. Then the spelling and grammar. Then the spelling and grammar. The plot was ok, although there was no development.
