2 s«1»AquaMastaReport 2009-09-02 05:30:08Getting better, I like the story line but a little more “sex” or at least some touching would be nice. If you’re going to title a story “Pixie Lust”, please add a little lust, and not just adventure and intrigue. Indian xxx If you’re going to title a story “Pixie Lust”, please add a little lust, and not just adventure and intrigue. It would have been fine to work in a little jail cell sex. also if you were to make it a bit longer and add a little discripion to some characters so we can kind of get a feel for them, get to know them a bit :p Great story, Hope to read more!Report 2009-08-19 06:13:13The plot was interesting, but rushed and convoluted. =dreamer=«1» also if you were to make it a bit longer and add a little discripion to some characters so we can kind of get a feel for them, get to know them a bit :p Great story, Hope to read more!Report 2009-08-19
