Maybe, if you put more detail and stuff like that and checked it, it might have been better.READERReport 2007-07-22 07:30:59Why the fuck do idiots try to write stories, when they cannot even string a couple of words together and make some sense. Indian sex Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. Maybe, if you put more detail and stuff like that and checked it, it might have been better.READERReport 2007-07-22 07:30:59Why the fuck do idiots try to write stories, when they cannot even string a couple of words together and make some sense. 2. He’s only 11 when he wrote it! Maybe, if you put more detail and stuff like that and checked it, it might have been better.READERReport 2007-07-22 07:30:59Why the fuck do idiots try to write stories, when they cannot even string a couple of words together and make some sense.
