THIS SHOULD HAVE BEEN CHAPTER TWO OF A THREE OR FOUR CHAPTER SERIES. Indian xxx DELETE BOTH AND REWRITE IT AND ADD SOME BACKGROUND ON THE CHARACTERS AND A HELL OF A LOT MORE PLOT. WHO ARE THEY? 1 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-03-04 14:00:32WASTE OF TIME AND YOU POSTED IT TWICE LIKE AN IDIOT. WHAT WAS THEIR RELATIONSHIP TO EACH OTHER? WHO ARE THEY? YOU WASTED YOUR TIME OUR TIME AND THE SITES SPACE«1» YOU WASTED YOUR TIME OUR TIME AND THE SITES SPACE«1» 1 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-03-04 14:00:32WASTE OF TIME AND YOU POSTED IT TWICE LIKE AN IDIOT. WHO ARE THEY? THIS SHOULD HAVE BEEN CHAPTER TWO OF A THREE OR FOUR CHAPTER SERIES. THIS SHOULD HAVE BEEN CHAPTER TWO OF A THREE OR FOUR CHAPTER SERIES. WHAT WAS THEIR RELATIONSHIP TO EACH OTHER? 1 s«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-03-04 14:00:32WASTE OF TIME AND YOU POSTED IT TWICE LIKE AN IDIOT.















