Story a little short & I agree that Nikki should have been more involved. Hope U can develop Ur talent to be better, Certain areas show promise. Indian sex Even her’s was sketchy. Easy to do.!! Thank you for submitting Ur work. Thank you for submitting Ur work. !! Thank you for submitting Ur work. Hope U can develop Ur talent to be better, Certain areas show promise. Just got stories mixed up. For the most part it was delightful & I enjoyed it.«1» Thank you for submitting Ur work. Story a little short & I agree that Nikki should have been more involved. Hope U can develop Ur talent to be better, Certain areas show promise. Except for Renee, little to no character development or revelation of personality.. Just got stories mixed up. Easy to do.!! Thank you for submitting Ur work. 1 s«1»Dudley DowrongReport 2019-04-25 20:38:29Now I see where Sequoia got Nikki.
