but all-in-all it sucked lol«12345» Maybe, if you put more detail and stuff like that and checked it, it might have been better.READERReport 2007-07-22 07:30:59Why the fuck do idiots try to write stories, when they cannot even string a couple of words together and make some sense. wow this was just wow i thought it sucked. Indian sex He’s only 11 when he wrote it! Don’t but something up that you wrote when you were 11 man seriously this story sucked. He nvr said it was real. 2. His FIRST storie and 3. 43 comments«12345»Kiba SnowpawReport 2019-03-10 10:27:15I’m terrible at writing stories, but I’m pretty sure I could do a better job than this. 43 comments«12345»Kiba SnowpawReport 2019-03-10 10:27:15I’m terrible at writing stories, but I’m pretty sure I could do a better job than this. He’s only 11 when he wrote it! He’s only 11 when he wrote it!
