20 s«1234»Report 2014-01-16 10:31:56LMFAO all I can say is just WOW well u earned points for originality but I do have to agree with the other ers not sexy or scary and really short and not really any buildup and the climax of the story was rather dull not sidistic not scary not sexy honestly by the time I got to the climax I was still just thinking WOW WTF am I reading lolanonymous readerReport 2011-10-24 20:36:40wow. Indian Porn not sexy , and scary please dont write anymore thank youcajunReport 2009-08-09 05:56:10THIS HAS TO BE THE MOST DUMBEST STORY EVER. this story is neither sexy scary or funny. just wowseriously. it was actually quite boring.anonymous readerReport 2011-09-13 16:58:44I don’t want to live on this planet anymore.readerReport 2010-07-14 02:11:43that was horrible.
